Transitions
Transitions are words or phrases that help your paper “flow.” They allow readers to move easily between sections of your paper, and they set up the relationships between different points you make.
Transitions between paragraphs
Contrasting Ideas
The transition contrasts the ideas from paragraph A (Tan’s wellknown novel) with paragraph B (Tan’s not well-known rock band) to show us how the ideas are related.
...Amy Tan became a famous author after her novel, The Joy Luck Club, skyrocketed
up the bestseller list.
Though her fiction is well known, her work with the satirical garage band the Rock Bottom Remainders receives far
less publicity.
Cause and Effect
The transition shows that the main idea in paragraph A (a rise in profits) is caused by the idea in paragraph B (expanded international influence).
…Overall, Management Systems International has logged increased sales in every sector,
leading to a significant rise in third-quarter profits.
These impressive profits are largely due to the corporation's expanded international influence.
Repeating Key Words
The transition sentence takes key words from paragraph A (authentic worlds) and paragraph B (narrative) and combines them logically together.
…In his novel Feed, M. T. Anderson definitely possesses a talent for creating believably
authentic worlds, and though I was disappointed with the plot development, this shortcoming does not
distract from Anderson's call for us to evaluate our own materialism and dependency
on technology.
A major component to the authenticity of Anderson's new world is the narrator's voice. It was strangely refreshing to read a first-person narrative that actually sounded like it was coming from a teenage boy.
Expanding on a Key Concept
The transition sentence takes a theme (media shaping our ideas) and expands on it
in the next paragraph by relating it to older teens today
and what we can do to stop it.
…In the book, Veronica sadly realizes how much the media has unconsciously shaped her thinking – a danger many of us face today.
Even though being controlled by the media is a scary thought, becoming aware of such problems is the first step to creating
critical thinkers. M.T. Anderson's Feed is an excellent framework for older teens
to discuss and explore the urgency of such problems as over-dependency and consumerism
Transitions within paragraphs
| Logical Relationship | Transitional Expression |
|---|---|
| Similarity/Comparison | also, in the same way, just as...so too, likewise, similarly, along the same lines |
| Exception/Contrast | but, however, in spite of, on the one hand...on the other hand, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwithstanding, in contrast, on the contrary, still, yet, conversely, despite the fact that |
| Sequence/Order | first, second, third, ... next, then, finally |
| Time | after, afterward, at last, before, currently, during, earlier, immediately, later, meanwhile, now, recently, simultaneously, subsequently, then |
| Example | for example, for instance, namely, specifically, to illustrate, to take a case in point, consider |
| Emphasis | even, indeed, in fact, of course, truly |
| Elaboration | to put it another way, to put it bluntly, to put it succinctly, ultimately, in short, in other words, that is, by extension, actually, again |
| Cause and Effect | accordingly, consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus, it follows then |
| Additional Support or Evidence | furthermore, in addition, moreover, then, equally important, further, also, and, as well |
| Conclusion/Summary | finally, in a word, in brief, briefly, in conclusion, in the end, in the final analysis, on the whole, thus, to conclude, to summarize, in sum, to sum up, in summary |